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LAYOUT 1: GQ target market and you certainly made a great series of compositions that hit your target market, well thought out and executed. Very suggestive and yet over the top playful, tongue in cheek. Where is the kit/ - just missed it out? Are you selling the shorts? Where is the kit
ReplyDeleteLAYOUT 2; You spent so long getting the image to really look like a magazine advertisement. Again, another good choice of image, and placement of text. I do think what Maia said – the logo could have been put on the barrel.
LAYOUT 3: This is mans ultimate tool – they will be prepared. Perhaps the body text could be in white for contrast but the way it wraps the image is excellent. Bt then you would have to relook at the whole composition, once you change one object in a composition then you have to see how it works as a unit. Here in on time and done a great leap. Great series of men.
IDEA / Slogan: You have come a long way – you have this nailed, They have been targeted to the right audience, look great and the magazines you chose were perfect – great research