Hey George, where are all your other 10 roughs that had to be done? Where are your posted ideas for the poster? Where are the images that reference your designer? George, you have so much talent but is not coming through in this class. You seem to not get your roughs in on time and then have an issue doing several digital examples so we can work through what is working and what is not working. Firstly your text need a great deal of work – I is not being design with the space in mind and everything needs to work as objects that relate on the page. What id the most important piece of information – the Top heading is Not even reading as a design heading although it is more legible than the slogan. Every picture is the same value and then is not movement or intent in your sizes and shapes. George this could have been really good. I would suggest you really rework this. Why is the text all in caps? The only good part is the mouth and the words coming out but why is the address and the web site in purple up the top?? Please come and see me in my office hours so we can work through some of this
Hey George, where are all your other 10 roughs that had to be done? Where are your posted ideas for the poster? Where are the images that reference your designer?
ReplyDeleteGeorge, you have so much talent but is not coming through in this class. You seem to not get your roughs in on time and then have an issue doing several digital examples so we can work through what is working and what is not working. Firstly your text need a great deal of work – I is not being design with the space in mind and everything needs to work as objects that relate on the page. What id the most important piece of information – the Top heading is Not even reading as a design heading although it is more legible than the slogan. Every picture is the same value and then is not movement or intent in your sizes and shapes. George this could have been really good. I would suggest you really rework this. Why is the text all in caps? The only good part is the mouth and the words coming out but why is the address and the web site in purple up the top??
Please come and see me in my office hours so we can work through some of this